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FIC: Impasse (Chapter Seven)

Ohayo, minnasan, I hope everyone out there in Cyberland is doing well! I'm home today with a day off from work! Thankfully it fell today since Mum was diagnosed with Influenza A last night. So I was able to be home with her today. She's doing much better and it looks like the Tamaflu is doing the trick, but she'll have to be home from work for about three more days. Speaking of work, that has been a major fiasco, but I'll save that for another entry.

In cosplay news, I'm pleased to say that my Gackt silver hoodie from the 2nd half of his 2002 "Kagen no Tsuki" concert is about 45% finished. I would have probably had it done today, but my back started hurting and I had an issue with the front zipper. (I'm a perfectionist when it comes to things like zippers and buttons!) However, it's going to be a gorgeous hoodie! Now I just have to buy my capri pants and add the light blue accents. I already have the double pronged white belt. It's a bit of a "ghetto" cosplay, but I love the outfit and it's so comfortable and lightweight!

Now for the next chapter of the fic! I wrote this last night, read it, deleted the whole thing, rewrote it, wrote again on it this morning and I'm finally satisfied. There's a few twists and turns in this chapter as well as revealing who Ryeowook is in relation to the storyline and a bit of a focus on KyuMin! Woot! I hope everyone enjoys and ja ne! =~.^=V

"Impasse"
By: Miracle Shining

PAIRINGS: HanHae, HanTeuk, TeukHae, HanTeukHae, SiHan (past tense), KyuMin, ShinChul, etc.
RATINGS: PG-13 to NC-17 (will be notated if NC-17)
GROUPS: Super Junior, DBSK, Kitty GYM
GENRE: Action/Romance/Angst
WARNINGS: Violence, Sexual Situations, Dark Themes, Character Death
AUTHOR'S NOTES: Don't own them, never will, but thanks for reading!
SUMMARY: AU Storyline~In the South Korean underworld, a popular form of entertainment is fighting matches. Men are judged by the fighters they own. A troubled fighter with a past catches the attention of two long time friends and may lead them both to the brink of obsession.

*****



CHAPTER SEVEN: Erosion

It was very dark.

It took a moment for his eyes to open and even then the light that came pouring in was blinding. He closed his eyes rapidly and then tried to open them once again. The light caused a hazy blur to come over him for a few lingering moments. His pupils slowly began to shrink and then his vision came into focus. He could see that he was lying in a bed with a light blue comforter on top of him. The walls were a mild color of cream and there was a painting across from him of some flowers. A television was nestled in a kind of entertainment center and there was the faintest smell of cleaning products floating through the air. He tried to push himself up and then winced visibly.

“Careful!” came a familiar voice.

Donghae looked over as his sight finally cleared completely to see Eeteuk sitting beside his bed. He had a concerned look on his face, but was smiling still the same. The young man could see that there were a couple other people in the room along with Eeteuk.

“Heechul, Shindong?”

“He lives!” Heechul exclaimed dramatically. The showmanship did very little to cover up the fact that Heechul had been in fact worried sick.

“How are you feeling, Donghae?” Shindong questioned gently.

“Like I was shot.” came the simple reply.

“That you were, Hae, that you were.” Heechul chimed.

“Heechul!” Eeteuk scolded.

“You mean I was shot?” Donghae asked, his expression of disbelief.

“Yes, you were.” Eeteuk nodded. “But not as bad as that other guy Hankyung was fighting.”

Donghae thought for a moment and then replayed the events in his head that he could remember. He had pushed Hankyung down and then his shoulder felt like it was on fire. He remembered asking Hankyung if he was okay and then he could hear a man shouting in a mix of Japanese and Korean and Hankyung shouting for 911. After that, everything had disintergrated in his memory.

“What happened to that Jin?”

Shindong looked at Donghae grimly.

“Well, the good news is amidst all the panic someone did in fact call 911. However, because of the situation we were in with this being an underground establishment, Junsu had to do some quick maneuvering to make sure that the ambulance and police that came to the scene were under his payroll.”

“So needless to say, I’m afraid that Akanishi Jin bled a lot more than was probably necessary.” Eeteuk said quietly. “But he did make it to this hospital.”

Donghae was silent and then spoke, his voice a bare whisper.

“.....is he?...”

“He’s in critical condition right now. The doctors managed to get the bullet out of his stomach, but gut injuries are hard to judge. If he makes it through the next twenty four hours, they said he should survive.”

“Oh.” Donghae said softly. “Where’s Hankyung?”

“He was treated for his broken ribs and dislocated knee. He was let go about eight hours ago.” Eeteuk stated simply. “He was then picked up by one of Junsu’s cars and we haven’t seen him since.”

Donghae hoped that his disappointment was hidden well. He felt an overwhelming amount of sadness that Hankyung hadn’t even bothered to come and see him. He nonetheless turned on his charm and then smiled at everyone.

“Are all fights at Minwoo’s arenas like that one?”

“Hardly.” Heechul huffed. “Really, though Donghae, how did you know someone was going to try and shoot Hankyung?”

“I saw Minwoo looking up at a lighting rig from our box. I realized then he was mouthing words like ‘do it now, or do it right now’ or something like that. Then a spotlight swung by and I saw someone sitting up there.”

“Minwoo? Are you serious?” Shindong asked incredulously.

Donghae nodded.

“Um, shouldn’t we call the real police about this?”

Eeteuk, Shindong and Heechul all gave Donghae a look that made him avert his eyes. Eeteuk reached out his hand gently and squeezed Donghae’s.

“We’re not exactly the kind of group that can come to the police and report a crime. We are the crime, remember?”

Donghae nodded slightly at that comment. Eeteuk released his hand and then stood.

“I think we had better let you rest now. The doctors said if you look relatively good in the morning they’ll excuse you. The bullet only went through mostly skin and a little muscle, so they said it won’t affect you using your arm, but you’ll still have a scar.”

“Well, that’s minor compared to the alternative.” Donghae mused.

“Very true. All right then, you get some rest.” Eeteuk leaned in to give Donghae a kiss. He lowered his head suddenly.

“Donghae?” Eeteuk looked at him curiously.

“Eeteuk, I need to tell you something.”

The man then laughed softly and ruffled Donghae’s hair.

“Tell me in the morning then when I come and pick you up.”

“No, I need to tell you now.” Donghae stated.

Heechul looked at Shindong and then gestured for the door with his head. The heavier set man nodded and opened it up, Heechul and himself slipping out through the frame. Eeteuk looked at his friend, an eyebrow raised.

“What’s this all about, Donghae?”

The young man took a deep breath and then exhaled slowly. He gathered up his courage and looked up at Eeteuk’s gentle face. He swallowed back the fear that threatened to overtake him at that moment.

“Eeteuk, I... There’s something that I’ve been wanting to tell you for a while now.”

“What is it?”

“I... I really like you.” Donghae said softly.

“I like you too, Hae.”

“But...” Donghae felt as though his heart was going to beat right out of his chest as the next words came to his lips. “I don’t love you.”

The older man’s face was a complete blank for what felt like an eternity to Donghae. Eeteuk then ran his fingers through his longish bangs and blew out a soft puff of air. He folded his arms then and rolled his head a couple of times.

“Is that why you’ve been avoiding any direct contact with me?”

“I’m sorry, Teukieah, I didn’t know how to...”

“It’s that Hankyung, isn’t it?” Eeteuk interrupted.

Hearing Hankyung’s name made Donghae blush. He didn’t even know it until Eeteuk’s eyes narrowed slightly and then he sighed softly.

“It is.”

“Teukie, I’m so sorry... I’m really confused right now...” Donghae spilled out.

Eeteuk smiled a little and then sat on the side of the bed. He brought Donghae’s hand into his and squeezed gently again.

“I know. I mean, I guess I knew something would happen sooner or later. I some times think that maybe you weren’t made for this kind of life.”

Donghae bit his lip and felt the tears forming in his eyes. He turned his face to Eeteuk praying that the man wouldn’t be angry with him. He was suprised to see a rather soft look gracing the older man’s face.

“I’m sorry.” Donghae whispered again.

“I know, Donghae. We were friends first, business partners second, lovers third. I won’t lie and say that this doesn’t hurt. But if I can still have the first two, I’ll get used to not having the third.”

“.....thank you...” Donghae barely choked out the words.

“You’ll always be my little fish.” Eeteuk said gently. He released Donghae’s hand before rising from the bed. “I just hope that you’re feelings for this fighter aren’t in vain. I really do.”

The older man than headed to the door before glancing back over his shoulder. He gave Donghae a very soft smile.

“Get some rest. I promise I’ll be back in the morning.”

Donghae nodded, his soul grateful for the kindness and understanding his friend had for him. He laid back down and tried to push down the feeling of loneliness that were rising in his heart. He missed Hankyung terribly and found himself wondering where the man was at the moment. Just past his hospital window he could see the darkness of a storm creeping over the horizon. The sound of thunder rattled the room slightly and Donghae drew himself up into a tight ball.

Eeteuk closed the door quietly and wiped away a single tear that had slipped down his cheek. He drew in his breath and then forced a smile to his face. He would be okay as long as Donghae was happy. He glanced around for Heechul and Shindong when he sensed someone else was in the hallway.

“I always hated when you cried.”

The voice caused Eeteuk to freeze in his place before he turned slowly to see a slightly smaller man with dark hair brushing over his eyes. His lips were barely quirked in a smile.

“It’s been a very, very long time, Jungsu.”

“Jongwoon.”

*****

Kibum sat silently in the waiting room. He tapped his foot and then stood and walked back and forth for what felt like the millionth time. The doctors had not come out once during the past couple hours and he was ready to pull out his hair.

The disaster at Minwoo’s arena had been unexpected. Kibum found himself wondering if perhaps Hankyung had either bad luck or just a lot of enemies. He hadn’t waited around to see if the ambulance or any of Junsu’s special police force had gotten there. Instead he had disappeared among the chaotic crowd and to his car. He made it to the hospital only to be told that the doctors were seeing to Ryeowook and he would have to take a seat.

Kibum sat down again and picked up the same magazine. Instead of reading it he just rolled it back and forth in his hands. The sound of the ticking clock was deafening and he found himself wanting to rip the object off the wall and throw it down the stairwell. He rubbed his forehead and then looked up as the door to the waiting room opened. A doctor stepped through. He smiled at Kibum and nodded.

“Good news, the seizure wasn’t as bad as originally it seemed. There was a little blood in his lungs, but nothing that we weren’t able to treat. He was very lucky this time around, but we can’t guarantee how long his luck is going to hold out.”

“How much longer do you think he has?” Kibum always hated having to ask the question, it made everything feel too final to him.

“If the new medicine he’s on turns out to work well for him, he has a rather high percentage chance of pulling through. However, if he has another allergic reaction like he did to the last prescription, I’d say his time then is short, though I couldn’t give you a good guess at the moment.”

The dark haired man nodded as the doctor gave a sympathetic smile.

“Let’s hope for the best, Mr. Kim. If this new medicine works well, you’ll both have a long life to look foward too.”

Kibum smiled a little at that.

“Can I see him?”

The doctor nodded.

Kibum followed the man and went down the corridor. He was led into a nearby room. The doctor let him in and the man walked over to the bed. A number of wires and devices now hung off Ryeowook’s small slender frame. The oxygen tubes were attached to his nose and his breathing was soft and very even. Ryeowook’s closed eyes flickered back and forth and then finally opened. He blinked a couple times before turning his attention to Kibum sitting down next to him.

“Hey.” he said softly.

“Hey there.” Kibum nodded. “You look good.”

“I look awful.”

“Okay, you’re right.”

Ryeowook couldn’t help but grin despite his tired appearance. His expression changed then to a serious tone.

“The fight, Bummieah? What happened?”

Kibum sighed softly and looked gently at Ryeowook.

“Someone tried to shoot him.”

The slender young man closed his eyes and drew in a slow breath of oxygen through his tube.

“Did they catch him?” he asked very quietly.

“No, not this time either. But Donghae saw someone in the lighting rig. He threw himself at Hankyung and pushed him to the side. It was when your coughing seizure started that it all went to hell. Akanishi Jin ended up getting shot through the stomach and Donghae got grazed through the shoulder.”

“But he’s okay?”

“Aside from a small wound, he’ll be fine. Jin, we don’t know about yet. The Dancer only has some broken ribs and a dislocated knee from the actual fight.”

“He’ll recover from that, he always does.” Ryeowook said with a rueful smile. “I was sure that we would catch him this time around and vengance would be served.”

“This is the second time he’s struck, maybe Donghae saw or heard something and we can finish this once and for all.”

Ryeowook nodded and then smiled warmly at Kibum.

“Kibum?”

“Yah?”

“If he was still alive, what do you think would have happened?”

“I think that The Charmer would have been very, very proud of you.”

“Siwon would have been, wouldn’t he?” Ryeowook said with a happy smile before his eyes drifted closed and he fell into a light sleep.

The roll of thunder played in a the distance as Kibum watched his partner breathing quietly. He looked up at the ceiling for a brief moment, a silent prayer being sent.

“Siwon, I wish I would have had the chance to meet you. But your little brother and your Dancer miss you so much.”

*****

Junsu stood with Eunhyuk inside of the office of his home. The silence was thick and unsaid words were hanging dangerously in the air. The elegant man gazed outside as the clouds began to move in from the west. Another rain storm was coming as the heat of the day was giving way to the muggy evening. The heaviness outside just added to the tenseness inside the spacious surroundings.

“I didn’t know.” Junsu finally said.

“Never said you did.” Eunhyuk replied back simply.

Junsu sighed softly, pushing his fingers through his short hair. He glanced to his side to see Eunhyuk leaning against the side of his desk. He was playing with a pen, clicking it up and down before spinning it between his fingers. Junsu left his position in front of the spanning window and walked over to where Eunhyuk was resting. He took the pen from the man’s fidgeting fingers and set it down. They both stood awkwardly before Eunhyuk pushed off the desk. His arms came out and in a moment of weakness, Junsu collapsed into them, burying his face in the other’s neck.

“I’m so sorry, I’m so sorry, I’m so sorry...” Junsu kept repeating, his normally calm exterior cracking.

Eunhyuk just pressed his lips to the side of Junsu’s forehead.

“It’s not your fault. You know that. What happened, none of us knew it was going too.”

“Donghae did.” Junsu whispered softly. “And he almost got killed because of it.”

The businessman drew back and looked at Eunhyuk. His eyes were deeply troubled.

“Am I that awful of a man, HyukJae?”

“No. No, you’re not.” Eunhyuk replied gently. “Everything just went haywire. Look at it this way, if things hadn’t happened the way they did, Jin would have killed Hankyung. Kangin told me he was going to use him to commit suicide. Maybe this worked out for the better.”

Junsu laughed a little bitterly at that and shook his head.

“You always see the best in everything, don’t you?”

“I’ve always seen the best in you.” Eunhyuk replied quietly.

The other man barely smiled at that and leaned back into Eunhyuk’s embrace.

“Why do you stay with me despite everything I’ve done?”

“Because you’re my friend.” Eunhyuk pointed out. There was a pause then before he spoke. “And because despite everything, I love you.”

Junsu closed his eyes then as he gripped Eunhyuk’s shirt. He drew back only far enough to barely press his lips to the other man’s. The trainer was caught off guard for just a mere moment before he took control of the kiss. They parted slowly and Junsu rested his head back into Eunhyuk’s shoulder.

“Thank you.” he whispered softly.

Eunhyuk nodded. A loud crack of thunder was heard overhead and the first drops of rain began to trickle down the side of the mansion. He thought distantly that this would not be the final storm any of them were going to weather.

*****

Minwoo drummed his fingers against the shiny metal of his desk. The previous night’s events had not went at all like he had planned. Donghae’s overzealous nature had gotten him wounded by a shot that should have easily taken down Hankyung. The unfortunate incident involving Jin and his trainer Kame was not planned but both were expendable in Minwoo’s eyes.

However, the fact of the matter was that Yesung had failed in his duty once again and Hankyung was still alive. The first time had been problematic enough. Minwoo had not wanted Choi Siwon exterminated. Wounded if necessary, but not dead. The main target had been Hankyung but Yesung seemed to have gotten the two confused or so he said.

Minwoo stood from his desk and walked over to the window. The clouds had rolled in and a deep boom of thunder echoed through the office. He pushed some of his bleached yellowish hair from the side of his face and flipped open his cell phone. He whistled to himself before a voice on the other end picked up.

“Hello?”

“Yes, it’s me. Seems that Jongwoon, I mean, Yesung has failed once again.” Minwoo said with a sarcastic tone. “So that basically leaves me with one option.”

“Which I assume means me.” the voice on the other end stated mildly.

“You’re the best at what you do. Twice the amount of money if you get rid of not only Hankyung but also Yesung in the process.”

“No witnesses?”

“If there are, you know what to do.”

“Sure thing. Just out of curiosity, what’s your problem with the Chinese man any ways?”

“That’s my business, just do yours.”

“Okay.”

The click on the other end of the phone brought a dark smile to Minwoo’s face. The best way to get to the bottom of the situation was to find the closest person to it and use them.

*****

The sound of rain came down as Hankyung sat silently in his sparse, large room. His torso was wrapped up in carefully placed bandages and his knee was secured in another bandage. He looked out of the window watching the water slide down the panes. His thoughts turned over the events of the previous night, replaying each brutal moment with vivid clarity. He felt the guilt deep inside his stomach.

HANGENG!! THINK OF WHAT SIWON WOULD HAVE WANTED!!! DANCE, DAMN YOU, DANCE!!!

Kangin’s words echoed through his mind. He had never thought in that aspect until that moment. He knew deep down that Siwon would not have wanted him to waste away as he had let himself. He would have wanted him to try and live. Then Donghae being partially shot and Jin getting the bullet lodged into his stomach. Hankyung felt the pangs of responsibility for both injuries. He had wanted to see Kame to tell him he was sorry. He had wanted to sit with Donghae when he woke up. Instead, Junsu’s car arrived and he was shuffled off and driven back to the mansion. There was so much the Chinese man wanted to have done. Regret was weighing heavily on him, so much so he swore he could taste it on his tongue.

“Hankyung?” a very quiet voice spoke from behind.

The white haired man spun slightly where he was sitting to see Sungmin and KyuHyun standing a few feet away. Sungmin was holding a tray with a small bowl of rice and a set of chopsticks. KyuHyun had a tea pot with a cup for tea. The man looked at them curiously.

“We thought you might be hungry, so we made you a little rice. I’m sorry but I’m not a very good cook.” Sungmin noted as they brought the tray over.

Hankyung was genuinely suprised by the gesture. He took the tray and set it on the floor as Sungmin and KyuHyun knelt down. The taller fighter poured the tea carefully and offered the cup to Hankyung.

“We weren’t at the fight, but we heard what happened from Kangin. It sounded terrible.”

Hankyung nodded slightly as he took the cup from KyuHyun.

“Thank you.” he barely whispered.

“Are you doing all right?” the lanky youth questioned the Chinese man.

“I... I don’t know...” Hankyung confessed, not sure as to why he was talking to these two either. His wall felt like it was shaking back and forth and coming loose after last night’s events.

“Hankyung, is... Is this what will happen to Kyunnieah and me?”

“What do you mean?” he asked as he sipped his tea.

“Will us doing fighting result in all this... This underhanded violence?” Sungmin questioned.

The man looked at both of them. He realized at that moment there was so much innocence between them. He could see himself and Siwon when they were both idealistic and young. When fighting made enough money to get by and the whole purpose of it was the dirt of the arenas and the smell of cigarettes and the drunken cheers of the crowds.

“It wasn’t always like this. It used to be about the fighting and not about the prestige.” Hankyung said quietly. “You didn’t have to be number one, but if you were, it was amazing.”

“Is it true then? About you being The Dancer?” KyuHyun pressed.

Hankyung nodded slowly.

“It’s true.”

“So then you are Hangeng.” Sungmin said gently as he offered Hankyung the rice. The man took it graciously and barely smiled. The act felt a little strange to him but not unwelcome.

“I was but that part of me died.”

“Then the other man in the picture with Kangin. Is that Choi Siwon?”

“Yes, he was The Charmer.” Hankyung said around the little bit of rice in his mouth. For the first time in what felt like an age there wasn’t as bad a sting as he spoke of Siwon. A kind of relief was filling in it’s place.

“Kangin spoke often about both of you when he was almost sober. Kyunnieah and I tried to mold ourselves as close to being like you as we could. Kangin is an amazing trainer. He taught me so much and KyuHyun became such a great fighter thanks to his help. I don’t think we’ll ever be where Siwon and you were though.”

Hankyung set the bowl of rice down and unknown to even him, he reached out and took a hand of both KyuHyun and Sungmin. He looked at the two younger men and spoke very gently.

“Don’t try and be like us. We were something unique just like the both of you are. Boss is a good man, listen to what he has to say. Help him get better, help him leave that bottle and that guilt behind him. Teach him how to live again for not only Siwon, but for me.”

The two looked at Hankyung curiously.

“You make it sound like you’re leaving us or something, Hankyung.” Sungmin said lightly but there was worry on his face.

The man actually smiled, the act feeling foreign on his face. He released their hands and then began to eat the rice again. Both Sungmin and KyuHyun sat quietly with the legendary fighter, the silence welcome between them all.

"Sungmin cooks pretty well despite what he says, don't you think?" came a deep voice from behind the trio.

The three looked back to see Kangin standing with a bottle in his hand. Hankyung eyed the object to realize it was nothing more than bottle of water. He barely smiled as the man walked over.

"How are you feeling, Dancer?"

"No worse for ware, I guess." Hankyung responded.

"Hey, why don't you two head back to your room? I need to talk with Hangeng for a bit."

Sungmin and KyuHyun nodded. The two got up, their hands lacing
immediately and left the room together. Kangin watched them both with a fond expression.

"They're an amazing duo." he said quietly.

"They match well together." Hankyung agreed.

Kangin sat down beside Hankyung as the rain grew heavier above their heads. There was a mutual stretched quiet before Kangin finally spoke again.

"It wasn't your fault tonight either."

"I know."

"Do you really?"

"No."

"Didn't think so."

"Boss?"

"Yah?"

"Did I wrong someone?" Hankyung asked simply.

Kangin considered the question and thought back to over three years ago. The fateful night of Hankyung's birthday replayed in his mind. He frowned deeply as he stepped back from that date and searched his memories.

"The only thing that comes to mind is that accident that happened when you and Charmer were fighting those other two guys just before your birthday."

Hankyung looked distant and then nodded slightly.

"I didn't know that the fighter was going to die."

"No one did. The odds that he would have had a pre-existing injury to his spine were amazing. You didn't know when you kicked him in the back, it would have paralyzed him."

"You know I didn't even know what had happened to him until after Kim Kibum came to the hospital four days after I lost Siwon. He filled me in about what had been happening in the fighting arenas as we left."

"They had to pull the plug on him. He was a vegetable." Kangin noted. "All I know was his investor was really ticked off, whoever that was."

Hankyung picked at the rice in his bowl. He turned his attention to Kangin before laying down on his side, his head barely resting on Kangin's knee. The gesture shocked the older trainer. He paused before resting his hand carefully on Hankyung's bleached hair.

"You haven't done this with me since you and Siwon would fall asleep with your heads in my lap while I was reading."

"...I know." Hankyung responded very softly.

The lanky man closed his eyes as Kangin began to barely stroke his uneven hair. The man sighed and looked out of the window.

"That young man who ran down into the cage. What's his name?"

"Donghae."

"Crazy bastard, isn't he?"

"Yes."

"You like him." Kangin stated.

Hankyung didn't say in anything. Kangin hadn't been expecting a response. The two gazed out the window as the storm settled overhead, the rolling thunder playing off the walls and ceiling.

"Boss?" Hankyung finally said.

"Yah, Dancer?"

"........Thank you for everything."

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kenshinjunkie03
Mar. 25th, 2008 10:36 pm (UTC)
why do i get the feeling that maybe eeteuk might be the one that minwoo called? i hope not, but it would be kinda cool if he was^^;; and i'm glad that no one died...yet. i worry about jin-san, but i hope he pulls through. and i'll stop here, or i'll just keep talking and might have to do a lj-cut just to post this comment^^;;

btw...you rock^_^V
miracleshining
Mar. 29th, 2008 12:39 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! And thanks for the continuing support of my fiction, it makes me want to write the best that I can for everyone here! As for the person Minwoo made the call too? It'll be a suprise, but Eeteuk is a good guess!
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miracleshining
Mar. 29th, 2008 12:40 am (UTC)
Thank you so much for your comments! I feel bad that I seem to make everyone cry with me fiction. =;.;= I do have the KangHan interaction, I think it's very sweet. Thank you so much and as for Wookie, it was revealed he's Siwon's little brother! =^^=
followurdestiny
Mar. 25th, 2008 11:49 pm (UTC)
Wow I had the same thought as kenshinjunkie03, but we'll see what happens...
I really liked how the tension is being build, through the imaginary of the 'building storm'...I'm so hooked on this story! Can't hardly wait for the next chapter!..^__^
miracleshining
Mar. 29th, 2008 12:42 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! Eeteuk is a good guess, but everyone will have to see who the mystery person Minwoo called is. I actually had only intended there to be a storm for mood, but after you stated abou the imagery, I realized I accidentally did that! ::chuckles::
the_calen
Mar. 26th, 2008 01:01 am (UTC)
OH MY GOD. WAAAH YAY THE MYSTERY OF RYEOWOOK IS REVEALED.
I am so akejalksjdflkaj glad he didn't die. Oh god. Wookie actually has backbone in this fic and it makes me ridiculously happy.
Man, even during the lulls in action, there's a sense of tension permeating everything (even the sweet parts). This is what makes it so addicting, I think.
miracleshining
Mar. 29th, 2008 12:43 am (UTC)
Thank you! I think that Ryewook and KiWook need a lot more love and that Wookie (as you said) has more backbone than he's given credit. (Plus I adore him to no end!)

I hope the next chapter will be as tense and addicting!
sugarwarrior
Mar. 26th, 2008 01:07 am (UTC)
omg, i kinda cried through this and the sixth chapter.. @_________@;;
it was just so exciting!
the story is getting more complicated and addciting.. XDD
There's so many twisted stuff between the characters D=
Is MinWoo the investor that Kangin mentioned?? Possibly..
keep writing ^______^♥
miracleshining
Mar. 29th, 2008 12:44 am (UTC)
Thank you! Man, I make everyone cry! =;.;= But I'm truly glad you've enjoyed the storyline thus far. And whether Minwoo is the investor or if he's working for the investor will be revealed!
rainbowxromance
Mar. 26th, 2008 03:15 am (UTC)
O.M.G I completely love these fanfics of yours, I read them all tonight and omg..just..wow. So well written and described so well! A lot of drama but its all so good. Im very muchly looking foward to more! ^o^
miracleshining
Mar. 29th, 2008 12:45 am (UTC)
Thank you so much for reading my work! I hope that my storyline and chapters will continue to be worth your time to read!

Oh, and your icon... ::EATS IT:: So yummy!
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wings_strength9
Mar. 26th, 2008 03:44 am (UTC)
Y. Y MUST YOU DO THIS TO ME?

you know i was thinking about this story, and i was like, oh maybe theres an update, and then THERE WAS. you are magical kthanks.

and then i was like IM NOT GONNA CRY THIS CHAPTER KEHEHEHEH. and then i did. THREE TIMES AGAIN DAMMIT.

first when kibum sent a prayer to siwon. and i swear, its the little things you do that make me cry because i was tearing up but then i saw 'YOUR dancer' and then i started sobbing. strangely, not that many tears came out, more like dry sobbing, but i suppose thats because i spent them all on your last chapter.

and then when hankyung was all like HELP KANGIN FOR ME KYUMIN. SAVE HIM. GOODBYE. cry, cry.

and then i thought i would last the rest of the chapter BUT THEN HANKYUNG WITH THE HEAD ON THE LAP AND THE LAST LINE THE VERY LAST LINE.

i think most of my favorite parts are interactions between kangin and hankyung. becasue gawd, they are so fricken gorgeous. in a simple kinda way, with the i-wont-say-everything-but-you-understand-me-anyways kinda feel.
plus hankyung sleeping in kangins lap <33 they've got such a close bond. and i can't quite describe it, because its not quite brotherly, but it feels like something more than that and ajshdlfs.

RYEOWOOK I HAVE BEEN WONDERING WHY YOU ARE RANDOMLY THERE. BUT NOW YOU ARE SIWONS LITTLE BROTHER AND AJSHLDFJA I WONDER WHAT HE THINKS OF HANKYUNG.

and i think that i should be happy that hankyung is getting better at the hangeng and mentioning siwon thing,but i FEEL SO GUILTY because im sad because the highly biased part of me is still hoping for sihan. im sorry T.T

and i want you to know that i wasn't so keen on this story after the siwon death (IM SORRY) but your writing, and the plot, and the style and everything kept me here and im completely looking forward to anything you write. you are kinda amazing (KANGHAN MOMENT. I NEED TO TELL YOU MY LOVE OF THEIR INTERACTIONS ONE MORE TIME)

.....im sorry T.T im spamming you with essays for every review now.
miracleshining
Mar. 29th, 2008 12:52 am (UTC)
I ABSOLUTELY love when you comment! I really enjoy how much this storyline means to you because it means that much more to me to make it the best that I possibly can.

I'm really glad that the Kangin and Hankyung scenes came out the way they did. I rewrote that part a number of times before I was satisfied. I'm glad you saw there was the potential for KangHan there. (I wanted it to have a feel of as you put it, "beyond brotherly." Like something could have been there if things had been different after the loss of Siwon.)

As for Ryeowook, it will be revealed about his relationship not only with Siwon, but with Hankyung also.

And don't feel guilty about still being bias to SiHan. I do have plans to write an exclusive SiHan piece in the future with you in mind! =^^=

Thank you again for your compliments, all that you say means the world to me.! And finally... ::EATS LUSCIOUS ICON WITH SYRUP::
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miracleshining
Mar. 29th, 2008 12:54 am (UTC)
Thank you so much for reading my work and continuing with the storyline!

You're so right, there was a past YeTeuk, and more on that relationship will be revealed as the storyline goes along.

And Uedo (the bleached KAT-TUN member) is an excellent guess for the hitman. Minwoo may want revenge on Hannie, or he may in fact be working for the person who wants revenge. ::chuckles::

Jin and Kame will come more into light in the following chapters too again!
skittles
Mar. 26th, 2008 05:33 am (UTC)
I'm not very familiar with the other bands you used so I'm still getting them confused, but google is a lifesaver. Aside from that, yet another fabulous chapter. So many twists and turns--I love an intricate plot. Can't wait to see the next chapter!
miracleshining
Mar. 29th, 2008 12:55 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm glad that google has helped with the bands you don't know. I hope that my plotline can continue to intrigue and hopefully tie together at the end!

Oh and you're icon? ::giggles madly:: Love, love, love it!
crosssdx
Mar. 26th, 2008 06:39 am (UTC)
awwwe, I'm glad I found this story to read =]
The pairings are odd, but very well welcomed. It's a very interesting story and I'd love to read more! Do update soon and I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope all will end up well in the end.
Crazy bastard, isn't he? indeed.
miracleshining
Mar. 29th, 2008 12:56 am (UTC)
I appreciate so much that you took the time to read my little piece of fiction! I'm glad you've also enjoyed it.

I love that "crazy bastard, isn't he" line, it just seemed like such a Kangin thing to say. I hope that the next chapter will be worth the wait!
panda3035
Mar. 26th, 2008 12:21 pm (UTC)
oh wow. that explains everything now. well, i think the ending's going to be pretty dark and lots of death. Unless your going to put some twist in there now, I'm excited to see how you will play it out!
miracleshining
Mar. 29th, 2008 12:57 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm glad that a few things were revealed to help the storyline make a bit more sense. There will be a darker edge as we close in toward the end and there will be blood, oh yes, there will be blood... ::gets rid of "Saw" moment out of head:: There will also be a couple more twists and turns to look forward too!
arina_shinh
Mar. 26th, 2008 02:03 pm (UTC)
Oh, I was hoping so much for the encounter of HanHae...
Ah, finally, Ryeowook secret revealed....
Damn Minwoo, now he's not only after hankyung, also yehsung...
Gah, I wonder what relationship Eeteuk have with Yehsung...
And yes, I've got the feeling that the person Minwoo call to kill them both is Eeteuk... erm, let me think about that again...
Okay maybe not...

You really plot your chapters well...
You're awesome!!
Update soon!
miracleshining
Mar. 29th, 2008 12:59 am (UTC)
Thanks so much! The encounter with HanHae is coming very soon. (In fact, it's roughly going to take up two whole chapters on it's own! =O.o=) Eeteuk is a very good guess for who Minwoo may have called, but it'll be a suprise until the end! =^^=

I hope my next chapter is well worth the wait!
angel_ehron
Mar. 26th, 2008 02:24 pm (UTC)
GUH!! *dead from the cuteness that is Hankyung* You have me totally addicted to this story. It makes my day everytime there is an update. *jumps happily in chair* I can't wait for the HanHae love!! XD Update soon please!! *hugs*
miracleshining
Mar. 29th, 2008 01:00 am (UTC)
Yay, hugs! ::hugs back:: I'm so glad that you've enjoyed the storyline, it means the world to me that you've continued to read this piece!

There will be more HanHae soon, in fact their main encounter is going to take up roughly two chapters on their own. =O.o= I hope the next chapter is well worth the wait!
xoxosuju
Mar. 26th, 2008 04:30 pm (UTC)
Do I see past YehTeuk??? xDDD

Wow, Hankyung actually talked to people!!!! 8D

And Wookie, I don't get him, yet. =[

Gah!!!!! No death counts yet!!!! =]

I hope Hankyung doesn't die, or Yesung.. =]

I can't wait for the next chappie!
miracleshining
Mar. 29th, 2008 01:02 am (UTC)
Thank you!

You're very right, there is in fact a past YeTeuk, more on that relationship will be revealed very soon!

Ryeowook was notated in this chapter as being Siwon's younger brother, which explains his desire for revenge on the one who shot him. (In this case, we know it was Yesung, but he doesn't.)

And no death counts yet, but it's still early in the storyline! XD

I hope my next chapter is worth the wait!
ja_ka_sa
Mar. 26th, 2008 08:51 pm (UTC)
Beautiful Beautiful Beautiful. ENding is making me sad, and cry inside so sad and happy moment between Boss, and Dancer, appa playing his appa role so sweet.

hahaha Kangin made me laf, "Crazy bastard, isn't he?".
Hwaitin chappie 8. fighting ^o^.
miracleshining
Mar. 29th, 2008 01:04 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you've enjoyed reading this piece of fan fiction and I hope I continue to write chapters worth waiting for!

I love that "Crazy Bastard, isn't he?" line. It was such a Kanginappa thing to say. And the relationship between Hankyung and him was a real joy to write.

Thanks again!
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